Change:time.time! I gotta get things ready for when my parents come home. You have to go. Nice talkin’ to you. Bye.”Bye!” The door slammed shut behind Eric, this time, far too fast for him to grab it. Eric slammed his fist into the   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 625) View all updates.

Change:passedpast his mother, still standing in the doorway. “What? Eric get back in the house”house.” sheShe spoke with an air of finalityfinality, but Eric was already making his way up the front lawn. “Did you herehear me? I said you’re not going anywhere!”   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 650) View all updates.

Change: Eric caught a glimpse of a flash of white light behind him. He turned around but there was nothing there. Well, nothing except the small, red creature who’swhose brilliant large eyes stared back into his. Eric’s jaw almost dropped. Previous Page I Table of COntents I Next Page   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 563) View all updates.

Change:anyone-noanyone--no everyone--- that has so much as bumped into you. What-is-you-problem!?”What-is-your-problem?!” Toby ended his outburst with a sharp, accusatory jab to Eric’s chest with his index finger. There were no swear words, no cussing in Toby’s question,   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 564) View all updates.

Change:hereshere's the thing, the cast Ben Barnes. Ben BarnesBarnes's youngest playing age is 17! HeresHere's a pick:pic: There's a link in it so just click to see the rest of the cast.2/09/07Like here I just found out that   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 157) View all updates.

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Change:Anywho,Anyhoo, sometimes I right good poetry- actually that's for you to decide. But I guess I'll go through all my writing and start uploading my fabulous poems. Hope it doesn't burn your eyes. Peace. Out.2/14/07-Here's my poem Today- I haven't decided   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 163) View all updates.

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Change: concieved.conceived. With his friends, he travels across universes and dimensions to unlock the mystery of who gave him this incredible power!Main Book series:Jet Storm-The Wanderer: Dawn of the HeroJet Storm-The Wanderer: Transcending FairytalesJet Storm-The Wanderer: The Scions of EchidnaJet Storm-The Wanderer: Future High   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 73) View all updates.

Change:lifelife; being beat buyby school matesmates, bully or notnot, and the way he is treated by his parents. But Zane's world is not just hell figurativley- itsit's literally. Zane is a Devil, but unlike all the   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 94) View all updates.